Friday, 19 December 2014

#FFF Flash Fiction Friday - torn


The Flash Friday Fiction gang are the best damn group of perverts you'll ever read.
Every Friday we write flashes of precisley100 words inspired by a given picture.




He'd fled here for sanctuary but she was already there, waiting.
She smiled. A knowing smile, a smile that knew so much yet hinted she knew even more. Her eyes, as dark as the habit she wore, as dark as the habits she'd indulged him, smiled also. The rosary lay at her feet, just as he soon would. His heart was as ripped as her stockings and already hers; his torn soul was about to follow.
"Please, I never meant to..."
"No, but you did, didn't you? And now it's time for you to pay. You are mine now. Forever."


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9 comments:

  1. Oh, DK, so intriguing! I love your parallels and analogies. Great visuals and beautifully constructed. I am hooked. Now, what? xo

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  2. Wow! Nicely done, Sir! Very well put together. I definitely think we need more!

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  3. Oooh, loving the dark undertones here. Great flash :-)

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  4. Amazing flasher. I want to read more about the punishment. Keep the story going

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  5. Now you left me curious. I'm dying to know more. Great flash DK.

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  6. Dark and excellently written definitely a flash worth expanding

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  7. Mmm shivers! I love the fear she puts into him. Seducing him into her power. I only wonder what he did soo badly, or was it a good bad or naughty bad? ;-) Awesome flash.

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  8. Oooooh very intriguing. I want to know more!

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