Every Friday we write flashes of precisley100 words inspired by a given picture.
The silk caressed her skin in the few places it touched her.
Its diaphanous flow contrasted with the weight of the curtains. Just like the
taut muscles of his body, his masculinity, had contrasted with her femininity,
her apparent submission. He'd believed
that he'd dominated and controlled her but that was part of her plan. She'd
seduced him and let him drown in the pleasure of her body. But her submission
had dictated what had happened, just it would now dictate what he would do for
her. She watched as he drove out of the gates. He was hers now.
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I love the power struggle in this piece, or rather the lack of it. You can sense his smugness although it isn't really shown, which is a perfect contrast to her certainty and calm.
ReplyDeleteAnother piece that brought light, and an air of sensuality.
ReplyDeleteExcellently written flash.
ReplyDeleteOh I like it a lot. Great Flash DK. I guess he's bitten off more than he can chew :-)
ReplyDeleteFascinating. So much in such a small word count. Extremely sensuous, and I agree with Angelica. Even without him actually being there you can feel his smug attitude, clueless that she's the one holding the leash. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteYou wane philosophical, DK. Nothing more beautiful than a woman acknowledging her power in and out of the bedroom. Great flash :-)
ReplyDeleteWow! I love how he feels she has submitted to him, but it was really the other way around. She had him in her claws and he was actually under her control. Awesome flash!
ReplyDeleteAll powerful woman. Beware lol. Great flash
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